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		<title>By: Katie Hart</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2011/10/04/take-a-deep-breath%e2%80%94it-could-be-your-last/#comment-19135</link>
		<author>Katie Hart</author>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Oct 2011 11:54:15 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>I'm curious why you decided to go with two different covers for the rerelease. At first glance, the e-cover looks like a comic book version of Buffy the Vampire Slayer, until you realize that isn't a stake she's holding. But I bought a copy anyhow. :) Even though I do have the original book, bought at a used bookstore before I'd ever heard of the Snowflake Method or MRUs. It was autographed by both of you too. I couldn't believe someone had gotten rid of it and snapped it up immediately - kind of like I did with this 99 cent ebook.

&lt;strong&gt;Randy sez&lt;/strong&gt;: The reason for two different covers is that there are two different publishers involved. We are publishing the e-book version of &lt;em&gt;Oxygen&lt;/em&gt; under our own publishing company, DitDat, Inc., which is owned by me and John. 

&lt;strong&gt;We decided who our target audience is&lt;/strong&gt;--people who like fast-paced action novels with a strong female lead character. Then we looked at the covers of current books targeted to that audience. Then we created a concept and hired graphic artists to make the cover. It didn't turn out exactly the way we imagined, but it was close. We don't believe the cover will appeal to everybody. We only need it to appeal to our target audience. John and I are both in our target audience, and we "eat our own dog food" -- we both like the cover.

&lt;strong&gt;Why two publishers?&lt;/strong&gt; We have no skill in creating paper editions, but Jeff Gerke, publisher at Marcher Lord Press does, and he jumped at the chance to do the paper version of &lt;em&gt;Oxygen&lt;/em&gt;. Jeff hired his own graphic designer to create a cover targeted to his target audience for the book.

&lt;strong&gt;Different publishers; different covers&lt;/strong&gt;. This is common in publishing. However, the content is the same, with the minor exceptions noted above.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m curious why you decided to go with two different covers for the rerelease. At first glance, the e-cover looks like a comic book version of Buffy the Vampire Slayer, until you realize that isn&#8217;t a stake she&#8217;s holding. But I bought a copy anyhow. <img src='http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> Even though I do have the original book, bought at a used bookstore before I&#8217;d ever heard of the Snowflake Method or MRUs. It was autographed by both of you too. I couldn&#8217;t believe someone had gotten rid of it and snapped it up immediately - kind of like I did with this 99 cent ebook.</p>
<p><strong>Randy sez</strong>: The reason for two different covers is that there are two different publishers involved. We are publishing the e-book version of <em>Oxygen</em> under our own publishing company, DitDat, Inc., which is owned by me and John. </p>
<p><strong>We decided who our target audience is</strong>&#8211;people who like fast-paced action novels with a strong female lead character. Then we looked at the covers of current books targeted to that audience. Then we created a concept and hired graphic artists to make the cover. It didn&#8217;t turn out exactly the way we imagined, but it was close. We don&#8217;t believe the cover will appeal to everybody. We only need it to appeal to our target audience. John and I are both in our target audience, and we &#8220;eat our own dog food&#8221; &#8212; we both like the cover.</p>
<p><strong>Why two publishers?</strong> We have no skill in creating paper editions, but Jeff Gerke, publisher at Marcher Lord Press does, and he jumped at the chance to do the paper version of <em>Oxygen</em>. Jeff hired his own graphic designer to create a cover targeted to his target audience for the book.</p>
<p><strong>Different publishers; different covers</strong>. This is common in publishing. However, the content is the same, with the minor exceptions noted above.</p>
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		<title>By: Shirls</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2011/10/04/take-a-deep-breath%e2%80%94it-could-be-your-last/#comment-19136</link>
		<author>Shirls</author>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Oct 2011 13:23:01 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Hi Randy - that Amazon link takes me to a page where it says $2.99 although the B&#38;N one is 99 cents. Would you have a look please?
Many thanks.

&lt;strong&gt;Randy sez&lt;/strong&gt;: Hi Shirls, as I recall, you live in South Africa. As I noted above in the blog post, Amazon doesn't price the book the same for all international customers. 

&lt;strong&gt;I've heard from many readers&lt;/strong&gt; around the world, and most are getting it for 99 cents. A few are seeing a price of $2.99, and we're sorry about that, but it's not something we can change. A very few are not able to buy it at all, and we're extremely sorry about that, but again, that problem is above our pay grade. 

&lt;strong&gt;No doubt&lt;/strong&gt; there are good reasons for these pricing anomalies, but we don't know what they are. We hope that in a few years, all these international commerce issues will be resolved. That day is not yet, however. What is amazing is how broad the worldwide distribution capabliities of Amazon and B&#038;N actually are. An author with a laptop can write a novel today, upload it tomorrow, and in a couple of days, somebody on the other side of the world can buy it. Amazing. Even with the occasional glitches, amazing.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Randy - that Amazon link takes me to a page where it says $2.99 although the B&amp;N one is 99 cents. Would you have a look please?<br />
Many thanks.</p>
<p><strong>Randy sez</strong>: Hi Shirls, as I recall, you live in South Africa. As I noted above in the blog post, Amazon doesn&#8217;t price the book the same for all international customers. </p>
<p><strong>I&#8217;ve heard from many readers</strong> around the world, and most are getting it for 99 cents. A few are seeing a price of $2.99, and we&#8217;re sorry about that, but it&#8217;s not something we can change. A very few are not able to buy it at all, and we&#8217;re extremely sorry about that, but again, that problem is above our pay grade. </p>
<p><strong>No doubt</strong> there are good reasons for these pricing anomalies, but we don&#8217;t know what they are. We hope that in a few years, all these international commerce issues will be resolved. That day is not yet, however. What is amazing is how broad the worldwide distribution capabliities of Amazon and B&#038;N actually are. An author with a laptop can write a novel today, upload it tomorrow, and in a couple of days, somebody on the other side of the world can buy it. Amazing. Even with the occasional glitches, amazing.</p>
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		<title>By: David</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2011/10/04/take-a-deep-breath%e2%80%94it-could-be-your-last/#comment-19137</link>
		<author>David</author>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Oct 2011 16:10:31 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Hey Randy,

Just bought the book yesterday and am steaming through it. Great stuff!! And I might add that the cover is great (no offense Katie). I should mention that I think it's interesting that it's categorized as futuristic fiction, as much of the book takes place in 2012... :). Anyway, congrats on the success, I can only pray for similar results (without the fan base it might be tough).

-Dave

&lt;strong&gt;Randy sez&lt;/strong&gt;: Glad you like it, Dave! We originally wrote the book in 1999/2000, when 2012 seemed a LONG way off. Unfortunately, a real trip to Mars still is a LONG way off, although we didn't know that at the time. After we published Oxygen, 9/11 happened, and military spending went way up. That dashed any possibility of a Mars mission. </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Randy,</p>
<p>Just bought the book yesterday and am steaming through it. Great stuff!! And I might add that the cover is great (no offense Katie). I should mention that I think it&#8217;s interesting that it&#8217;s categorized as futuristic fiction, as much of the book takes place in 2012&#8230; :). Anyway, congrats on the success, I can only pray for similar results (without the fan base it might be tough).</p>
<p>-Dave</p>
<p><strong>Randy sez</strong>: Glad you like it, Dave! We originally wrote the book in 1999/2000, when 2012 seemed a LONG way off. Unfortunately, a real trip to Mars still is a LONG way off, although we didn&#8217;t know that at the time. After we published Oxygen, 9/11 happened, and military spending went way up. That dashed any possibility of a Mars mission.</p>
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		<title>By: J.J. Lancer</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2011/10/04/take-a-deep-breath%e2%80%94it-could-be-your-last/#comment-19140</link>
		<author>J.J. Lancer</author>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Oct 2011 22:23:03 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>I would really like to buy this but I don't have a Kindle and B&#38;N doesn't accept Paypal. Looks like I'm toast, which is a shame because I was really looking forward to reading this story + all the bonus features.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I would really like to buy this but I don&#8217;t have a Kindle and B&amp;N doesn&#8217;t accept Paypal. Looks like I&#8217;m toast, which is a shame because I was really looking forward to reading this story + all the bonus features.</p>
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		<title>By: Davalynn Spencer</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2011/10/04/take-a-deep-breath%e2%80%94it-could-be-your-last/#comment-19141</link>
		<author>Davalynn Spencer</author>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Oct 2011 22:33:12 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Randy,

I don't read sci-fi ... but I read this book a while ago. And the next one, Fifth Man. And all of your other titles. Hmmm. Pretty interesting for someone who doesn't read sci-fi. What was that your teaser said about action, humor, and romance? They held me, the non-sci-fi reader, because of the writing, storyworld, voice, characterization, MRUs and all the other stuff you talk about. It was all there; I couldn't help but read. And then ... I bought the 99-cent version, too, because, 1. I wanted all that author dissection you referred to, and 2. I wanted a Nook version.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Randy,</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t read sci-fi &#8230; but I read this book a while ago. And the next one, Fifth Man. And all of your other titles. Hmmm. Pretty interesting for someone who doesn&#8217;t read sci-fi. What was that your teaser said about action, humor, and romance? They held me, the non-sci-fi reader, because of the writing, storyworld, voice, characterization, MRUs and all the other stuff you talk about. It was all there; I couldn&#8217;t help but read. And then &#8230; I bought the 99-cent version, too, because, 1. I wanted all that author dissection you referred to, and 2. I wanted a Nook version.</p>
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		<title>By: Martha Miller</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2011/10/04/take-a-deep-breath%e2%80%94it-could-be-your-last/#comment-19142</link>
		<author>Martha Miller</author>
		<pubDate>Wed, 05 Oct 2011 23:44:28 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>I'm buying it. You make a good case for doing just that, and I love reading on my Kindle! Looking forward to it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m buying it. You make a good case for doing just that, and I love reading on my Kindle! Looking forward to it.</p>
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		<title>By: Lauren Miller</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2011/10/04/take-a-deep-breath%e2%80%94it-could-be-your-last/#comment-19147</link>
		<author>Lauren Miller</author>
		<pubDate>Thu, 06 Oct 2011 11:48:20 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Hey Randy,

I got your "special offer" email in my inbox yesterday and purchased your book 30 seconds later.  You've got a knack for the power of advertising!  I've already started perusing the appendixes and, no joke, they're chock full of everything you said they'd be.  Plus the coupon, very cool.  

Your talk on "high concepts" is now making me revisit my current work-in-progress to see if it's got enough impact.

Thanks for making such an incredibly awesome offer open to your blog readers. 

P.S. Hopefully from your sales you've seen that I'll buy just about anything you've got on your site.  Please let me know when Fiction 301 and Fiction 401 are available! Congrats on #1 in Futuristic Romance!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Randy,</p>
<p>I got your &#8220;special offer&#8221; email in my inbox yesterday and purchased your book 30 seconds later.  You&#8217;ve got a knack for the power of advertising!  I&#8217;ve already started perusing the appendixes and, no joke, they&#8217;re chock full of everything you said they&#8217;d be.  Plus the coupon, very cool.  </p>
<p>Your talk on &#8220;high concepts&#8221; is now making me revisit my current work-in-progress to see if it&#8217;s got enough impact.</p>
<p>Thanks for making such an incredibly awesome offer open to your blog readers. </p>
<p>P.S. Hopefully from your sales you&#8217;ve seen that I&#8217;ll buy just about anything you&#8217;ve got on your site.  Please let me know when Fiction 301 and Fiction 401 are available! Congrats on #1 in Futuristic Romance!</p>
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		<title>By: Shirls</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2011/10/04/take-a-deep-breath%e2%80%94it-could-be-your-last/#comment-19157</link>
		<author>Shirls</author>
		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Oct 2011 09:48:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2011/10/04/take-a-deep-breath%e2%80%94it-could-be-your-last/#comment-19157</guid>
					<description>Hi Randy - okay I get it about the international price. It's still a fabulous deal and I have bought it. But oh dear, you don't know what you've started with me now. I never realized I could get Kindle editions on my PC. As fast as a blink. I'm excited to read the novel - just up my street. Thanks so much!

&lt;strong&gt;Randy sez&lt;/strong&gt;: Hey Shirls, have fun! Once you start reading e-books, you may never go back to paper. Since I started reading on my iPad, I've bought far more e-books than I normally would have in paper. I've hardly bought any paper since then, and it's great to have this growing library in my iPad that I can take with me anywhere. Have fun!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Randy - okay I get it about the international price. It&#8217;s still a fabulous deal and I have bought it. But oh dear, you don&#8217;t know what you&#8217;ve started with me now. I never realized I could get Kindle editions on my PC. As fast as a blink. I&#8217;m excited to read the novel - just up my street. Thanks so much!</p>
<p><strong>Randy sez</strong>: Hey Shirls, have fun! Once you start reading e-books, you may never go back to paper. Since I started reading on my iPad, I&#8217;ve bought far more e-books than I normally would have in paper. I&#8217;ve hardly bought any paper since then, and it&#8217;s great to have this growing library in my iPad that I can take with me anywhere. Have fun!</p>
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		<title>By: Lainy</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2011/10/04/take-a-deep-breath%e2%80%94it-could-be-your-last/#comment-19191</link>
		<author>Lainy</author>
		<pubDate>Sun, 09 Oct 2011 17:18:37 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Hi Randy, could you make it available through Smashwords please? Unfortunately Kindle ebooks are not available here in the Middle East. 

Thanks and more power!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Randy, could you make it available through Smashwords please? Unfortunately Kindle ebooks are not available here in the Middle East. </p>
<p>Thanks and more power!</p>
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		<title>By: Justice at forty below by Jack Singer</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2011/10/04/take-a-deep-breath%e2%80%94it-could-be-your-last/#comment-19828</link>
		<author>Justice at forty below by Jack Singer</author>
		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Mar 2012 11:35:08 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>I'm also interested to buy your book. I am so happy to have come across your blog.I was really looking forward to reading it.Keep up such good work in future too.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m also interested to buy your book. I am so happy to have come across your blog.I was really looking forward to reading it.Keep up such good work in future too.</p>
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		<title>By: Drum Play Along</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2011/10/04/take-a-deep-breath%e2%80%94it-could-be-your-last/#comment-21421</link>
		<author>Drum Play Along</author>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Mar 2012 00:53:33 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>I just want to say that I adore your website. I've been coming back here every night for a week studying up on how to create the perfect scene. I am trying to make the transition from wannabe writer to published Kindle author, but I'm not the kind to publish garbage. I'm a decent prose writer, but I get bogged down trying to structure an entire piece of fiction. Thank you so much for your witty, engaging, and very understandable description of how to structure scenes. Your examples are great, too. I purchased Oxygen today and will be diving in tonight. You are providing real value here for the writing community. Keep it up!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I just want to say that I adore your website. I&#8217;ve been coming back here every night for a week studying up on how to create the perfect scene. I am trying to make the transition from wannabe writer to published Kindle author, but I&#8217;m not the kind to publish garbage. I&#8217;m a decent prose writer, but I get bogged down trying to structure an entire piece of fiction. Thank you so much for your witty, engaging, and very understandable description of how to structure scenes. Your examples are great, too. I purchased Oxygen today and will be diving in tonight. You are providing real value here for the writing community. Keep it up!</p>
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