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	<title>Comments on: Walking, Chewing Gum, and Fiction Writing</title>
	<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2010/08/11/walking-chewing-gum-and-fiction-writing/</link>
	<description>America's Mad Professor of Fiction Writing</description>
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		<title>By: Sheila Deeth</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2010/08/11/walking-chewing-gum-and-fiction-writing/#comment-11509</link>
		<author>Sheila Deeth</author>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Aug 2010 20:30:38 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>I like those examples. Of course, now I'll not  be able to think about the difference without seeing three-eyed Martians, but I guess that's kind of the point of a really good example. Thanks.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I like those examples. Of course, now I&#8217;ll not  be able to think about the difference without seeing three-eyed Martians, but I guess that&#8217;s kind of the point of a really good example. Thanks.</p>
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		<title>By: Tammy</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2010/08/11/walking-chewing-gum-and-fiction-writing/#comment-11527</link>
		<author>Tammy</author>
		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Aug 2010 13:28:10 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>I've been reading (the Randy recommended) Sol Stein on Writing, and am just at the place where he discusses this very thing.  

These are some excellent tool for helping jump that hurdle in writing. I tend to get stuck telling, not showing (oops!!).  It’s a skill to learn to write in this way, I tend to have to go back and re-write at the moment. I’m hoping that with some more practice I’ll start thinking and typing like this too.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve been reading (the Randy recommended) Sol Stein on Writing, and am just at the place where he discusses this very thing.  </p>
<p>These are some excellent tool for helping jump that hurdle in writing. I tend to get stuck telling, not showing (oops!!).  It’s a skill to learn to write in this way, I tend to have to go back and re-write at the moment. I’m hoping that with some more practice I’ll start thinking and typing like this too.</p>
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