Comments on: On Those Pesky One-Sentence Storylines http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2010/05/28/on-those-pesky-one-sentence-storylines/ America's Mad Professor of Fiction Writing Wed, 16 May 2012 16:54:11 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.1.3 By: Tessa http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2010/05/28/on-those-pesky-one-sentence-storylines/#comment-9132 Tessa Fri, 28 May 2010 21:44:53 +0000 http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2010/05/28/on-those-pesky-one-sentence-storylines/#comment-9132 Dear Randy, I really like your idea of a forum. I look forward to sending in my storylines, and critiquing others :) Dear Randy,

I really like your idea of a forum. I look forward to sending in my storylines, and critiquing others :)

]]> By: Val Clark http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2010/05/28/on-those-pesky-one-sentence-storylines/#comment-9134 Val Clark Sat, 29 May 2010 00:41:20 +0000 http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2010/05/28/on-those-pesky-one-sentence-storylines/#comment-9134 Sounds like a good plan - absent loyal subscriber. :-) Sounds like a good plan - absent loyal subscriber. :-)

]]> By: Edwin D Ferretti III http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2010/05/28/on-those-pesky-one-sentence-storylines/#comment-9143 Edwin D Ferretti III Sat, 29 May 2010 10:18:50 +0000 http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2010/05/28/on-those-pesky-one-sentence-storylines/#comment-9143 I agree—this is a terrific idea—and I look forward to participating. I agree—this is a terrific idea—and I look forward to participating.

]]> By: Carrie Neuman http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2010/05/28/on-those-pesky-one-sentence-storylines/#comment-9147 Carrie Neuman Sat, 29 May 2010 13:34:16 +0000 http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2010/05/28/on-those-pesky-one-sentence-storylines/#comment-9147 A forum sounds like a great idea. I always see so many great one-sentance summaries I want to comment on, but there's always a million people after them. A forum sounds like a great idea. I always see so many great one-sentance summaries I want to comment on, but there’s always a million people after them.

]]> By: Camille http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2010/05/28/on-those-pesky-one-sentence-storylines/#comment-9148 Camille Sat, 29 May 2010 15:28:29 +0000 http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2010/05/28/on-those-pesky-one-sentence-storylines/#comment-9148 A brilliant physicist/author/inventor/mentor must save his magic novel-creating device from a deranged plumber's remote exploding helicopter. 20 words. Still too long? A brilliant physicist/author/inventor/mentor must save his magic novel-creating device from a deranged plumber’s remote exploding helicopter.

20 words. Still too long?

]]> By: Davalynn http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2010/05/28/on-those-pesky-one-sentence-storylines/#comment-9149 Davalynn Sat, 29 May 2010 16:17:14 +0000 http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2010/05/28/on-those-pesky-one-sentence-storylines/#comment-9149 Awesome, Camille, I love it. Though maybe you should add "-control" to the end of "remote." Do we separately count slash words and hyphenated words? If not, you're in at 16! Awesome, Camille, I love it. Though maybe you should add “-control” to the end of “remote.” Do we separately count slash words and hyphenated words? If not, you’re in at 16!

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