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	<title>Comments on: Cindy&#8217;s Puzzle Method, Day 8</title>
	<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2008/03/24/cindys-puzzle-method-day-8/</link>
	<description>America's Mad Professor of Fiction Writing</description>
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		<title>By: Daan Van der Merwe</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2008/03/24/cindys-puzzle-method-day-8/#comment-4563</link>
		<author>Daan Van der Merwe</author>
		<pubDate>Tue, 25 Mar 2008 06:25:51 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Very impressive! :-)

Gerhi, I deleted your last letter (and your e-mail address) by accident and would like to remain in contact.

You are welcome to phone my office. The number is in the Pretoria directory under Uys &#38; Coetzee Attorneys.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Very impressive! <img src='http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>Gerhi, I deleted your last letter (and your e-mail address) by accident and would like to remain in contact.</p>
<p>You are welcome to phone my office. The number is in the Pretoria directory under Uys &amp; Coetzee Attorneys.</p>
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		<title>By: Gerhi Janse van Vuuren</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2008/03/24/cindys-puzzle-method-day-8/#comment-4565</link>
		<author>Gerhi Janse van Vuuren</author>
		<pubDate>Tue, 25 Mar 2008 14:32:51 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Randy, sorry for the sidetrack here.

I am sure I can dig up your email address Daan. Otherwise email me at: my first name with an x behind at friendly Google's free email service.

I appreciate Cindy's sharing of her method. It has helped me a lot with being comfortable in the way I am working.
She said:
"I struggled for many years until finally I trusted what worked best, then I started analyzing it."

I would like to do that, except the first struggling bit. I haven't tried to write seriously for more than 10 years. To kick of now and trust what I'm doing is the right way is very difficult.

I have found that everybody has a system and 99% of other people's systems won't work for me. They would in fact stop me from working altogether. So I take the titbits from other people's methods that I can use and I chuck the rest.

The only trick is to know what to keep and what to chuck.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Randy, sorry for the sidetrack here.</p>
<p>I am sure I can dig up your email address Daan. Otherwise email me at: my first name with an x behind at friendly Google&#8217;s free email service.</p>
<p>I appreciate Cindy&#8217;s sharing of her method. It has helped me a lot with being comfortable in the way I am working.<br />
She said:<br />
&#8220;I struggled for many years until finally I trusted what worked best, then I started analyzing it.&#8221;</p>
<p>I would like to do that, except the first struggling bit. I haven&#8217;t tried to write seriously for more than 10 years. To kick of now and trust what I&#8217;m doing is the right way is very difficult.</p>
<p>I have found that everybody has a system and 99% of other people&#8217;s systems won&#8217;t work for me. They would in fact stop me from working altogether. So I take the titbits from other people&#8217;s methods that I can use and I chuck the rest.</p>
<p>The only trick is to know what to keep and what to chuck.</p>
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		<title>By: Gerhi Janse van Vuuren</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2008/03/24/cindys-puzzle-method-day-8/#comment-4566</link>
		<author>Gerhi Janse van Vuuren</author>
		<pubDate>Tue, 25 Mar 2008 14:45:08 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>And now a question (and possibly an idea for what to cover next Randy - hint): In my novel I have scene that takes place in the toilets of a Mall.

But I'm not sure toilets are the right thing to call them. Loo's doesn't seem right, lavatory is worse. Is it Men's and Ladies or what.
We used to talk about the little boys room and the little girls room.

So, the question in two parts: what do you call a public loo in America, and how do you deal with these regional language anomalies?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>And now a question (and possibly an idea for what to cover next Randy - hint): In my novel I have scene that takes place in the toilets of a Mall.</p>
<p>But I&#8217;m not sure toilets are the right thing to call them. Loo&#8217;s doesn&#8217;t seem right, lavatory is worse. Is it Men&#8217;s and Ladies or what.<br />
We used to talk about the little boys room and the little girls room.</p>
<p>So, the question in two parts: what do you call a public loo in America, and how do you deal with these regional language anomalies?</p>
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		<title>By: Robert Treskillard</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2008/03/24/cindys-puzzle-method-day-8/#comment-4567</link>
		<author>Robert Treskillard</author>
		<pubDate>Tue, 25 Mar 2008 15:20:05 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Randy,

Those are fun web addresses!  Technical question on this ... what method do you use to forward them to your www.advancedfictionwriting.com site?

I've been confused on whether you do it "temporary" or "permanent", and if permanent, what method.  I've heard you can be dinged by the search engines because they think you are posting duplicate content when you actually are not.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Randy,</p>
<p>Those are fun web addresses!  Technical question on this &#8230; what method do you use to forward them to your <a href="http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com" rel="nofollow">www.advancedfictionwriting.com</a> site?</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve been confused on whether you do it &#8220;temporary&#8221; or &#8220;permanent&#8221;, and if permanent, what method.  I&#8217;ve heard you can be dinged by the search engines because they think you are posting duplicate content when you actually are not.</p>
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		<title>By: Sheila Deeth</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2008/03/24/cindys-puzzle-method-day-8/#comment-4568</link>
		<author>Sheila Deeth</author>
		<pubDate>Tue, 25 Mar 2008 16:09:28 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Many thanks, Randy and Cindy. I've loved this series, and it's very timely for me, as I'm starting one thing and tidying up another both at the same time. Helps to remember which stage each one is in.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Many thanks, Randy and Cindy. I&#8217;ve loved this series, and it&#8217;s very timely for me, as I&#8217;m starting one thing and tidying up another both at the same time. Helps to remember which stage each one is in.</p>
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		<title>By: Camille</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2008/03/24/cindys-puzzle-method-day-8/#comment-4569</link>
		<author>Camille</author>
		<pubDate>Tue, 25 Mar 2008 19:29:27 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Gerhi, the most common, polite term is 'restroom'. But there are also a number of other terms, some quite colorful, so my guess is that your choice might depend on the character's social-economical-educational status. 

I am also writing characters and setting outside the familiarity of my country. I am trying to learn what idioms and expressions are used in modern day Scotland and have begun looking for a pen pal there who can help me find the correct idioms and phrases to use. I hope to find an author, actually, or someone with an understanding of the current language. 

It's funny how easy it is to forget that another English speaking country would use entirely different phrases and expressions. What's up with that?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Gerhi, the most common, polite term is &#8216;restroom&#8217;. But there are also a number of other terms, some quite colorful, so my guess is that your choice might depend on the character&#8217;s social-economical-educational status. </p>
<p>I am also writing characters and setting outside the familiarity of my country. I am trying to learn what idioms and expressions are used in modern day Scotland and have begun looking for a pen pal there who can help me find the correct idioms and phrases to use. I hope to find an author, actually, or someone with an understanding of the current language. </p>
<p>It&#8217;s funny how easy it is to forget that another English speaking country would use entirely different phrases and expressions. What&#8217;s up with that?</p>
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		<title>By: Karla</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2008/03/24/cindys-puzzle-method-day-8/#comment-4570</link>
		<author>Karla</author>
		<pubDate>Tue, 25 Mar 2008 23:28:34 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Thanks for sharing the puzzle method with us!  So little time -- so many puzzle pieces!  :-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for sharing the puzzle method with us!  So little time &#8212; so many puzzle pieces!  <img src='http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /></p>
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		<title>By: Donna</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2008/03/24/cindys-puzzle-method-day-8/#comment-4650</link>
		<author>Donna</author>
		<pubDate>Fri, 28 Mar 2008 00:17:48 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Yes, thank you for sharing this method. It helps me a lot in knowing that there is logic in not working chronologically. 

I'd also be interested in a doc with all the steps in one place.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, thank you for sharing this method. It helps me a lot in knowing that there is logic in not working chronologically. </p>
<p>I&#8217;d also be interested in a doc with all the steps in one place.</p>
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