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	<title>Comments on: Critiquing Your Author Bios</title>
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		<title>By: Mischelle Creager</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2253</link>
		<author>Mischelle Creager</author>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Sep 2007 05:57:31 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Randy, thank you for the critique of the first three paragraphs of my synopsis.  I'm re-working it now.

I appreciate your looking at our author bios.  Here is mine:

Mischelle Creager is a member of Woodwights of Oklahoma City, American Christian Writers, and American Christian Fiction Writers.  She began writing articles and short stories seven years ago.  Several of these have been published in the local ladies church newsletter, Ties That Bind.  She has taught the three-year olds in Bible class, been a pre-school Bible class co-ordinator, and has an on-going coffee ministry on Sunday morning.  

Mischelle used her fears, depression, and thoughts in the years following the Oklahoma City bombing for the basis of her book about a woman’s emotional journey.  Mischelle, like her main character, Abby, a young bride in 1870 Wyoming, lost her self-worth as wife and mother when events beyond her control led her to question her place in the family.  Both Mischelle and Abby slipped off their walk with God as anger and fear increased.  They felt they should be everything their families wanted.  And when they could not, they felt they had no worth.  Skewed though their perceptions were—that was their reality, until they came back to God and learned to lean on the family and friends He gave them.  

Married for thirty-five years, Mischelle lives in Oklahoma with her husband, who is retired from the Social Security Administration.  They have two children, a son in law school and a married daughter.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Randy, thank you for the critique of the first three paragraphs of my synopsis.  I&#8217;m re-working it now.</p>
<p>I appreciate your looking at our author bios.  Here is mine:</p>
<p>Mischelle Creager is a member of Woodwights of Oklahoma City, American Christian Writers, and American Christian Fiction Writers.  She began writing articles and short stories seven years ago.  Several of these have been published in the local ladies church newsletter, Ties That Bind.  She has taught the three-year olds in Bible class, been a pre-school Bible class co-ordinator, and has an on-going coffee ministry on Sunday morning.  </p>
<p>Mischelle used her fears, depression, and thoughts in the years following the Oklahoma City bombing for the basis of her book about a woman’s emotional journey.  Mischelle, like her main character, Abby, a young bride in 1870 Wyoming, lost her self-worth as wife and mother when events beyond her control led her to question her place in the family.  Both Mischelle and Abby slipped off their walk with God as anger and fear increased.  They felt they should be everything their families wanted.  And when they could not, they felt they had no worth.  Skewed though their perceptions were—that was their reality, until they came back to God and learned to lean on the family and friends He gave them.  </p>
<p>Married for thirty-five years, Mischelle lives in Oklahoma with her husband, who is retired from the Social Security Administration.  They have two children, a son in law school and a married daughter.</p>
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		<title>By: Christophe Desmecht</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2254</link>
		<author>Christophe Desmecht</author>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Sep 2007 06:13:14 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2254</guid>
					<description>Alright, here's my crappy attempt:

Christophe Desmecht is self-proclaimed Euro Trash.  Not in the actual sense of the term, but just because he likes the sound of it.  Living in Belgium, the heart of Europe, he hopes to dig deep into the mystical past of the continent and produce some fiction that's both enjoyable and mind-challenging at the same time.

He enjoys writing about werewolves and nutjobs, and though he claims to be neither, he also states he's properly house-trained and the newspapers should come off the carpet soon.  He also doesn't howl at the moon... anymore.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Alright, here&#8217;s my crappy attempt:</p>
<p>Christophe Desmecht is self-proclaimed Euro Trash.  Not in the actual sense of the term, but just because he likes the sound of it.  Living in Belgium, the heart of Europe, he hopes to dig deep into the mystical past of the continent and produce some fiction that&#8217;s both enjoyable and mind-challenging at the same time.</p>
<p>He enjoys writing about werewolves and nutjobs, and though he claims to be neither, he also states he&#8217;s properly house-trained and the newspapers should come off the carpet soon.  He also doesn&#8217;t howl at the moon&#8230; anymore.</p>
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		<title>By: Christophe Desmecht</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2255</link>
		<author>Christophe Desmecht</author>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Sep 2007 06:20:05 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2255</guid>
					<description>You know, I had no trouble writing about myself in the third person.  In fact, I liked it so much I think I might start to refer to myself like this all the time.

Should make for interesting conversations around the office!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You know, I had no trouble writing about myself in the third person.  In fact, I liked it so much I think I might start to refer to myself like this all the time.</p>
<p>Should make for interesting conversations around the office!</p>
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		<title>By: Camille</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2257</link>
		<author>Camille</author>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Sep 2007 07:36:31 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2257</guid>
					<description>What's 'interesting' to some is irritating to others. 

Alright then, I'll dig down and come up with the "Why", but at the moment I'm still in shock that you included my (ahem) bio.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What&#8217;s &#8216;interesting&#8217; to some is irritating to others. </p>
<p>Alright then, I&#8217;ll dig down and come up with the &#8220;Why&#8221;, but at the moment I&#8217;m still in shock that you included my (ahem) bio.</p>
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		<title>By: Christophe Desmecht</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2258</link>
		<author>Christophe Desmecht</author>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Sep 2007 08:13:32 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2258</guid>
					<description>I'm sorry if my poor attempt at wit irritated you, Camille :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m sorry if my poor attempt at wit irritated you, Camille <img src='http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /></p>
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		<title>By: Destiny</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2259</link>
		<author>Destiny</author>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Sep 2007 11:28:21 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2259</guid>
					<description>Mmm...thanks for answering all those questions. Maybe if your story is called "The Sword's End" or something similar, and you have a background in weapon making it would help.

I wonder how one gets about getting one.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Mmm&#8230;thanks for answering all those questions. Maybe if your story is called &#8220;The Sword&#8217;s End&#8221; or something similar, and you have a background in weapon making it would help.</p>
<p>I wonder how one gets about getting one.</p>
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		<title>By: Pam Halter</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2260</link>
		<author>Pam Halter</author>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Sep 2007 12:16:26 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2260</guid>
					<description>Christophe, I laughed out loud at your bio! If your writing is as witty and fun, I think you'll do well.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Christophe, I laughed out loud at your bio! If your writing is as witty and fun, I think you&#8217;ll do well.</p>
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		<title>By: Lynda</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2261</link>
		<author>Lynda</author>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Sep 2007 13:15:11 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2261</guid>
					<description>Christophe, You sold me. Hehe.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Christophe, You sold me. Hehe.</p>
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		<title>By: Karla Akins</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2263</link>
		<author>Karla Akins</author>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Sep 2007 13:35:33 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2263</guid>
					<description>I am keeping a log of "Randyisms," and this one really hurt!  LOL.

"Because the world has enough writers who are sweet and old-fashioned and faith-filled and write sweet, old-fashioned faith-based romances for those pesky normal women with nice nails. But I bet it could use a sassy writer who writes that kind of fiction.

Think hard about this: Why are you writing this kind of fiction? Obviously, it’s because you like it. But why? There’s got to be some contradiction deep inside you. Contradictions make people interesting."

I'm going to think about this one long and hard.  I happen to be what people would consider "normal" (except for the the nice nail part -- pianists and typists don't get to have those).  This Randyism made me go "ouch," and I felt kind of sad.  I don't like to read romance novels but I do like to write romance into my novels.  It makes me sad there are too many "nice, sweet romance writers" out there!  I'm not expressing myself very well (the natives are restless here) but I've copied this statement into my "Randyisms" file to ponder on it.

I also wish I could be clever and funny like Camille!  If I had written something like that it would be a disaster.  I could just see the editors thinking, "this woman is a nut case, forget her!"  I have got to find my own skin and feel good in it where writing is concerned.  I don't think I've quite found it yet.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am keeping a log of &#8220;Randyisms,&#8221; and this one really hurt!  LOL.</p>
<p>&#8220;Because the world has enough writers who are sweet and old-fashioned and faith-filled and write sweet, old-fashioned faith-based romances for those pesky normal women with nice nails. But I bet it could use a sassy writer who writes that kind of fiction.</p>
<p>Think hard about this: Why are you writing this kind of fiction? Obviously, it’s because you like it. But why? There’s got to be some contradiction deep inside you. Contradictions make people interesting.&#8221;</p>
<p>I&#8217;m going to think about this one long and hard.  I happen to be what people would consider &#8220;normal&#8221; (except for the the nice nail part &#8212; pianists and typists don&#8217;t get to have those).  This Randyism made me go &#8220;ouch,&#8221; and I felt kind of sad.  I don&#8217;t like to read romance novels but I do like to write romance into my novels.  It makes me sad there are too many &#8220;nice, sweet romance writers&#8221; out there!  I&#8217;m not expressing myself very well (the natives are restless here) but I&#8217;ve copied this statement into my &#8220;Randyisms&#8221; file to ponder on it.</p>
<p>I also wish I could be clever and funny like Camille!  If I had written something like that it would be a disaster.  I could just see the editors thinking, &#8220;this woman is a nut case, forget her!&#8221;  I have got to find my own skin and feel good in it where writing is concerned.  I don&#8217;t think I&#8217;ve quite found it yet.</p>
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		<title>By: Christophe Desmecht</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2264</link>
		<author>Christophe Desmecht</author>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Sep 2007 13:53:55 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2264</guid>
					<description>Karla, I did this once and the result surprised me a lot.  Try to sum yourself up in a few sentences.  Then do it in one.  Then a few words, and keep going until you end up with just one or very few words.

Not sure if it works for you, but for me the result was quite a surprise.

Pam &#38; Lynda: thanks! I thought I was beyond hope or medication.  Now I know it's just one of the two!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Karla, I did this once and the result surprised me a lot.  Try to sum yourself up in a few sentences.  Then do it in one.  Then a few words, and keep going until you end up with just one or very few words.</p>
<p>Not sure if it works for you, but for me the result was quite a surprise.</p>
<p>Pam &amp; Lynda: thanks! I thought I was beyond hope or medication.  Now I know it&#8217;s just one of the two!</p>
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		<title>By: Jane Robertson</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2266</link>
		<author>Jane Robertson</author>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Sep 2007 14:25:11 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2266</guid>
					<description>Thank you, Randy! I knew I was being windy, but I wasn't sure what mattered and what didn't (mostly that).</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you, Randy! I knew I was being windy, but I wasn&#8217;t sure what mattered and what didn&#8217;t (mostly that).</p>
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		<title>By: Camille</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2268</link>
		<author>Camille</author>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Sep 2007 17:59:43 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2268</guid>
					<description>Christophe - sorry, I wasn't referring to your remark about interesting, but Randy's. He said contradictions make people interesting, and I was smirking about how those who know ME might think otherwise, so a slam on me, not you. It was late and I was dozing off at the pc, didn't even see your post. I would never make a mean-spirited remark like that, you know.

Karla - I think you and I are more alike than we know, my apologies. (what kind of hog to you ride?) 

I'm also a little sad about Randy's comment about too many sweet old fashioned types. Sass will always be around, but someone has got to bring back an appreciation for honorable, noble characters. That's why I love Jane Austen's work. But she's dead. So it's up to us biker women with a hidden soft side to shake things up and help the world see that there is pain and depth and struggle and strength in characters who seem on first glance too wholesome and upstanding. It doesn't come easy to them, y'know. I know, I'm married to one. They're misunderstood and I want to tell their story. There is great value in quiet integrity, and it's sad that it's overlooked or dismissed in a world where compromise and vulgarity are exalted.

I already know where my next novel is headed. It will be witty and sarcastic and poignant. And there WILL be a Harley.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Christophe - sorry, I wasn&#8217;t referring to your remark about interesting, but Randy&#8217;s. He said contradictions make people interesting, and I was smirking about how those who know ME might think otherwise, so a slam on me, not you. It was late and I was dozing off at the pc, didn&#8217;t even see your post. I would never make a mean-spirited remark like that, you know.</p>
<p>Karla - I think you and I are more alike than we know, my apologies. (what kind of hog to you ride?) </p>
<p>I&#8217;m also a little sad about Randy&#8217;s comment about too many sweet old fashioned types. Sass will always be around, but someone has got to bring back an appreciation for honorable, noble characters. That&#8217;s why I love Jane Austen&#8217;s work. But she&#8217;s dead. So it&#8217;s up to us biker women with a hidden soft side to shake things up and help the world see that there is pain and depth and struggle and strength in characters who seem on first glance too wholesome and upstanding. It doesn&#8217;t come easy to them, y&#8217;know. I know, I&#8217;m married to one. They&#8217;re misunderstood and I want to tell their story. There is great value in quiet integrity, and it&#8217;s sad that it&#8217;s overlooked or dismissed in a world where compromise and vulgarity are exalted.</p>
<p>I already know where my next novel is headed. It will be witty and sarcastic and poignant. And there WILL be a Harley.</p>
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		<title>By: D. E.  Hale</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2269</link>
		<author>D. E.  Hale</author>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Sep 2007 19:00:45 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Ok, after that my mind is just going all over the place. Like Camille, I seem to be a contradiction of sorts, but I don't know what to do with that revelation. I'm a plain-jane homeschooling mommy of 3 who is also the wife of a minister, BUT I like to write Christian Fantasy that is in no way all nicey-nicey. It's very blunt. For the characters to survive the story, they must travel down a very hard, and bloody road. One of my friends actually told me I needed to tone down all the "blood and guts".

So, why do I write that stuff??? Hmmm...I'm going to be thinking about that one for awhile. I mean, do I have a deeper reason? I don't think so. I just wrote it that way because it was necessary for the story to be right. I love those kinds of stories that really tug at your soul and make you think, and that's what I want to do for others - make them think about their faith.

I may have just stumbled upon something. So would that be the tie? I mean, that fact that I've been the wife of a minister/missionary for nearly 20 years? If it is, how is that marketable? Even as missionaries we never did anything revolutionary or anything. What would be interesting enough about me to market? 

Ok, now I'm confused again.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ok, after that my mind is just going all over the place. Like Camille, I seem to be a contradiction of sorts, but I don&#8217;t know what to do with that revelation. I&#8217;m a plain-jane homeschooling mommy of 3 who is also the wife of a minister, BUT I like to write Christian Fantasy that is in no way all nicey-nicey. It&#8217;s very blunt. For the characters to survive the story, they must travel down a very hard, and bloody road. One of my friends actually told me I needed to tone down all the &#8220;blood and guts&#8221;.</p>
<p>So, why do I write that stuff??? Hmmm&#8230;I&#8217;m going to be thinking about that one for awhile. I mean, do I have a deeper reason? I don&#8217;t think so. I just wrote it that way because it was necessary for the story to be right. I love those kinds of stories that really tug at your soul and make you think, and that&#8217;s what I want to do for others - make them think about their faith.</p>
<p>I may have just stumbled upon something. So would that be the tie? I mean, that fact that I&#8217;ve been the wife of a minister/missionary for nearly 20 years? If it is, how is that marketable? Even as missionaries we never did anything revolutionary or anything. What would be interesting enough about me to market? </p>
<p>Ok, now I&#8217;m confused again.</p>
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		<title>By: Andra M.</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2270</link>
		<author>Andra M.</author>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Sep 2007 19:06:18 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2270</guid>
					<description>Well, dang, here I was all set to resubmit my little bio based on Randy's suggestions and all the other bios submitted so far, but I find myself in the middle of a conversation.

Luckily it's short, so Camille, Christophe, and Karla, please jump over me and continue! 

Anyway, here's my second run:

Andra M is a member of the Christian Writer’s Guild, having successfully completed their two-year Apprentice writing course a few years ago. She holds two AAS degrees in Civil Engineering Technology, and Drafting and Design Technology, and she works for a civil engineering firm as a Registered Land Surveyor. Andra spends the bulk of her spare time studying and practicing the craft of writing, and working toward the day she can write full-time. She and her husband are looking forward to their first child's arrival in January.

Andra's writing credits so far include three short stories in two editions of "Drabbles," a science fiction anthology published quarterly by Sam's Dot Publishing, and a how-to article published by "AUGIWorld," a computer-aided-drafting software magazine.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well, dang, here I was all set to resubmit my little bio based on Randy&#8217;s suggestions and all the other bios submitted so far, but I find myself in the middle of a conversation.</p>
<p>Luckily it&#8217;s short, so Camille, Christophe, and Karla, please jump over me and continue! </p>
<p>Anyway, here&#8217;s my second run:</p>
<p>Andra M is a member of the Christian Writer’s Guild, having successfully completed their two-year Apprentice writing course a few years ago. She holds two AAS degrees in Civil Engineering Technology, and Drafting and Design Technology, and she works for a civil engineering firm as a Registered Land Surveyor. Andra spends the bulk of her spare time studying and practicing the craft of writing, and working toward the day she can write full-time. She and her husband are looking forward to their first child&#8217;s arrival in January.</p>
<p>Andra&#8217;s writing credits so far include three short stories in two editions of &#8220;Drabbles,&#8221; a science fiction anthology published quarterly by Sam&#8217;s Dot Publishing, and a how-to article published by &#8220;AUGIWorld,&#8221; a computer-aided-drafting software magazine.</p>
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		<title>By: Andra M.</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2271</link>
		<author>Andra M.</author>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Sep 2007 19:11:13 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2271</guid>
					<description>D.E. You snuck in before me!

I think your missionary work would make a great tie-in, so I'd add it. Though it's not direct as far as marketing goes, it shows you have extensive knowledge and experience of the challenges Christians sometimes face. Your readers will look for that in your novels.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>D.E. You snuck in before me!</p>
<p>I think your missionary work would make a great tie-in, so I&#8217;d add it. Though it&#8217;s not direct as far as marketing goes, it shows you have extensive knowledge and experience of the challenges Christians sometimes face. Your readers will look for that in your novels.</p>
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		<title>By: Holly</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2272</link>
		<author>Holly</author>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Sep 2007 21:13:34 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2272</guid>
					<description>Question: Will an editor cast off an author when they learn the author is under 25? It got me thinking, because all these bios have oodles of life experience and here I am young and gung-ho. And then there's all the plagiarism scandals with young writers. I read on another author's site that no one has anything to write before they are 40 - but this writer doesn't believe that (and has the manuscripts to prove it!)

In other words, can my age hurt my ability to publish, no matter how strong the writing? Can my age hurt my ability to market? Is there anything special I need to do to play it down or play it up?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Question: Will an editor cast off an author when they learn the author is under 25? It got me thinking, because all these bios have oodles of life experience and here I am young and gung-ho. And then there&#8217;s all the plagiarism scandals with young writers. I read on another author&#8217;s site that no one has anything to write before they are 40 - but this writer doesn&#8217;t believe that (and has the manuscripts to prove it!)</p>
<p>In other words, can my age hurt my ability to publish, no matter how strong the writing? Can my age hurt my ability to market? Is there anything special I need to do to play it down or play it up?</p>
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		<title>By: D. E.  Hale</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2275</link>
		<author>D. E.  Hale</author>
		<pubDate>Sat, 15 Sep 2007 01:55:29 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2275</guid>
					<description>Thanks Andra</description>
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		<title>By: Mary Hake</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2276</link>
		<author>Mary Hake</author>
		<pubDate>Sat, 15 Sep 2007 02:36:19 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2276</guid>
					<description>I don't think age matters if the writing is strong. If you're a young success, you're haled as a prodigy. If you wait till you're in your 90s people are amazed your mind is still fit enough to coherently communicate. Turn age into an advantage, not a liability. You should be able to figure out how to give it a positive spin.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I don&#8217;t think age matters if the writing is strong. If you&#8217;re a young success, you&#8217;re haled as a prodigy. If you wait till you&#8217;re in your 90s people are amazed your mind is still fit enough to coherently communicate. Turn age into an advantage, not a liability. You should be able to figure out how to give it a positive spin.</p>
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		<title>By: Debbie Thorkildsen</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2282</link>
		<author>Debbie Thorkildsen</author>
		<pubDate>Sat, 15 Sep 2007 22:46:03 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2282</guid>
					<description>Christophe:
There's both a London and a Paris in Ontario, Canada.  Are you enjoying your Geography lesson?

Randy:
Thanks so much for giving your time and expertise to making us better writers with an increased chance of getting published.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Christophe:<br />
There&#8217;s both a London and a Paris in Ontario, Canada.  Are you enjoying your Geography lesson?</p>
<p>Randy:<br />
Thanks so much for giving your time and expertise to making us better writers with an increased chance of getting published.</p>
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		<title>By: Mischelle Creager</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2286</link>
		<author>Mischelle Creager</author>
		<pubDate>Sun, 16 Sep 2007 16:55:11 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2286</guid>
					<description>Ok, I already know I messed up on my first posting for my author bio--too wordy, too personal, too unfocased.  That's what happens will too little sleep.  Here is a revised one:

Mischelle Creager is a member of Woodwights of Oklahoma City, ACW, and ACFW.   Several of her articles have been published in the ladies church newsletter, Ties That Bind.  

Married for thirty-five years, Mischelle lives in Oklahoma with her husband who is retired from the Social Security Administration.  They have two children.

Dealing with her family’s suffering after the 1995 OKC bombing (her husband’s office), she slipped into depression, losing her self-worth as wife and mother.  She drew upon these feelings, fears, and thoughts when she wrote her novel.

When not writing, she loves to read, cook, and “google” historical research on the internet.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ok, I already know I messed up on my first posting for my author bio&#8211;too wordy, too personal, too unfocased.  That&#8217;s what happens will too little sleep.  Here is a revised one:</p>
<p>Mischelle Creager is a member of Woodwights of Oklahoma City, ACW, and ACFW.   Several of her articles have been published in the ladies church newsletter, Ties That Bind.  </p>
<p>Married for thirty-five years, Mischelle lives in Oklahoma with her husband who is retired from the Social Security Administration.  They have two children.</p>
<p>Dealing with her family’s suffering after the 1995 OKC bombing (her husband’s office), she slipped into depression, losing her self-worth as wife and mother.  She drew upon these feelings, fears, and thoughts when she wrote her novel.</p>
<p>When not writing, she loves to read, cook, and “google” historical research on the internet.</p>
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		<title>By: Nancy</title>
		<link>http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/09/13/critiquing-your-author-bios/#comment-2296</link>
		<author>Nancy</author>
		<pubDate>Mon, 17 Sep 2007 18:04:28 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Thanks for all the info, Randy and fellow bloggers. I, too, write seemingly contradictory fiction, and I would love to see a bio that nails the "opposite attracts" situation.
Thanks again, love the blog.
~N.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for all the info, Randy and fellow bloggers. I, too, write seemingly contradictory fiction, and I would love to see a bio that nails the &#8220;opposite attracts&#8221; situation.<br />
Thanks again, love the blog.<br />
~N.</p>
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