Comments on: Critiquing Mark http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/05/01/critiquing-mark/ America's Mad Professor of Fiction Writing Sat, 22 Nov 2008 14:12:24 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.1.3 By: Mark http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/05/01/critiquing-mark/#comment-531 Mark Wed, 02 May 2007 11:58:23 +0000 http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/05/01/critiquing-mark/#comment-531 Thank you so much, Randy. It's great to have a writer with credibility comment on your work. Even though I'm the author I am not sure that I could've gotten as much out of that sample regarding how it was constructed. Reading your other critiques is invaluable as it allows us to see exactly what you're explaining. Thank you for sharing your time with us, we really appreciate it! The fragment is from a science fiction short story titled, "Profit Master". Written over twenty years ago, it remains my favourite completed piece of work. Looking forward to the next post, Mark. Thank you so much, Randy.

It’s great to have a writer with credibility comment on your work. Even though I’m the author I am not sure that I could’ve gotten as much out of that sample regarding how it was constructed.

Reading your other critiques is invaluable as it allows us to see exactly what you’re explaining.

Thank you for sharing your time with us, we really appreciate it!

The fragment is from a science fiction short story titled, “Profit Master”. Written over twenty years ago, it remains my favourite completed piece of work.

Looking forward to the next post, Mark.

]]> By: Pam Halter http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/05/01/critiquing-mark/#comment-532 Pam Halter Wed, 02 May 2007 13:14:29 +0000 http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/05/01/critiquing-mark/#comment-532 I'm writing fantasy, too, and was real happy to read your comment on internal dialog. I will remember to keep it short! Thanks for taking the time with us, Randy. I’m writing fantasy, too, and was real happy to read your comment on internal dialog. I will remember to keep it short!

Thanks for taking the time with us, Randy.

]]> By: Kathryn http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/05/01/critiquing-mark/#comment-533 Kathryn Wed, 02 May 2007 15:06:51 +0000 http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/05/01/critiquing-mark/#comment-533 I, too, liked the explaination on internal dialogue. Definately something to remember! I, too, liked the explaination on internal dialogue. Definately something to remember!

]]> By: Christina Berry http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/05/01/critiquing-mark/#comment-534 Christina Berry Wed, 02 May 2007 16:18:57 +0000 http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/05/01/critiquing-mark/#comment-534 Great e-zine, again! But now I'm wondering who your flesh-and-blood critquers are. Our group, The Redeemed Writers, sends our samples out electronically ahead of time so we can get a thorough critque, but then we meet in person. The best of both worlds! Great e-zine, again! But now I’m wondering who your flesh-and-blood critquers are. Our group, The Redeemed Writers, sends our samples out electronically ahead of time so we can get a thorough critque, but then we meet in person. The best of both worlds!

]]> By: yeggy http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/05/01/critiquing-mark/#comment-535 yeggy Thu, 03 May 2007 00:30:47 +0000 http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/05/01/critiquing-mark/#comment-535 Thanks once again, Randy. Thanks once again, Randy.

]]> By: Andra M. http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/05/01/critiquing-mark/#comment-536 Andra M. Thu, 03 May 2007 03:16:13 +0000 http://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/blog/2007/05/01/critiquing-mark/#comment-536 Don't have much to add except I'm also enjoying and learning from these critiques. Once again I thank all the submitters, and you, Randy, for taking the time. Don’t have much to add except I’m also enjoying and learning from these critiques. Once again I thank all the submitters, and you, Randy, for taking the time.

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